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Work on that comprehension ability, if you take this the wrong way. Quote:
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you are the firts one that mentioned something that was misspelled ![]() |
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I did some basic editing. Corrected all the grammatical/spelling errors and word choices I found. Everything that I changed is in red. Also, when you want to emphasize something, don't use contractions, write the full two words out.
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Thanks a lot didyouknowthat
![]() I would like to add something to the text, but I don't know if it is written in good English, so I will put it here. Windows Vista is also delivered with a built-in User Account Protection, also known as UAP. This UAP seems great, because it prevents all users from performing potentially dangerous tasks without first providing security warnings to ensure that the user understands what they are doing before making a critical mistake. But this is Microsoft and Microsoft made it the most annoying feature ever. This UAP feature throws up an unbelievable amount of warning dialogs for even the most simple tasks! With the result that users won’t read the warnings anymore and will just click them away. The security dialogs are the same, they also pop-up every time when you try to launch a program which is not recognized by windows. |
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Thanx for all reactions.
I changed some things, and like some of you already said, this presentation is good to tell to people who don't no anything about computers Yesterday I had my presentation and it was okay (presentation time was 7 minutes, 5 was required)I don't know how the marks in England are but here in The Netherlands it was a 7.4 So I think it was B or something ![]() |
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Thanks for letting us know, we should have tried harder as my old teacher use to say and you may have got an A. Spelling was my strong point but grammar always let me down.
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