Respital

Warning: Some of the following poetry mite be unsuitable for children and/or individuals that can't understand what poetry is all about.
Reader discretion is advised.
Just like children are told, "If you can't say something nice, don't say anything at all.
Remember that before you reply.

Poetry is the voice of the heart.
Some people say "my feelings cannot be expressed in words..."
They obviously haven't tried writing poetry.

I'd like to read some poetry if anyone here has written some.
I know someone in the forum had to have written some poems.
Post them up, but only if you don't mind sharing them.
Please do not post any content that is against Forum Rules.

I don't have any of my poems...at the moment but will edit once i get them.
Meanwhile I'm just going to post this song or poem i heard at the beginning of a bleach episode.

I've watched the same drama unfold so many times,
Today kinda...feels like I'm watching it again.
The instant you started smiling,
was when the story began.
But i know the days will still,
be full of uncertainty and apprehension.
So open your eyes,
and replace your loneness with something more.
Find your lost bravery, and hold it up high!
I've finally remembered all the tears you've had to endure.
So we'll join hands, and a new story will unfold.

You can comment on it but i take absolutely no credit for it.
Once i type out some of my poetry, if you wouldn't mind commenting on it that would be great and i think that same will apply with all others that post their poetry.
(If any decide to that is. )

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pies

Heres one of mine
Dream
At midnight
I dreamed in fire and ice
For the vision it showed
My eye has seen twice
The fire it whispered
In tongues and in signs
And the ice like a dagger
had pierced in my mind
And though I awoken
The fire had stayed
The ice like a dagger
Had parted its way
And flames danced and bathed me
And begged me to lay
For the ice had me frozen
And when I awoken
The fire betrayed
And the flames that where piercing
Had melted away

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Respital

Very nice!
Thanks for posting, i honestly didn't think anyone would...
You should post some more once you have a chance.

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Ramomar

The Computer Forum has been asleep
For its elder members are not yet here
We all stay here and hope thus deep
That they hear, now, using their ears.

I hope today that I have a good sleep
My eyes is tired and I'm 'bout to fart
Somebody has burped, g4m3r0f1337
And from here he is not too far

Now Edd, for my poem this is the end
Newegg reviews I should write instead. (Geoff FTW! )

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Respital

Great!
Keep them coming everyone!

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