What do you think???

[cohen]

Hi Guys,

For my personal best i'm creating a computer game as well as building a computer (which i have done). I created a powerpoint on how to build a computer. I just want to know what you guys think... and what i need to add / edit....

Here are the links:

• Powerpoint Show for Office 1997 to 2003
• Powerpoint Show for Office 2007
• Powerpoint slides in pages PDF

they are all the same - I think

But i want to know, what i need to add and what needs to be changed.

Thanks a lot.

Cheers,

Cohen

 

[Ramodkk]

Looks pretty good. I'd remove some of the obvious stuff though like:

"buy all your components" (you don't expect them to go steal them do you? )
"take the RAM sticks out of the packet"
"remove the hard drive out of the antistatic bag"

All in all, looks good.

 

[cohen]

Looks pretty good. I'd remove some of the obvious stuff though like:

"buy all your components" (you don't expect them to go steal them do you? )
"take the RAM sticks out of the packet"
"remove the hard drive out of the antistatic bag"

All in all, looks good.

Awesome, i'll change that now, and then wait for some more feedback and then change the upload links.