Can this be improved?

[diduknowthat]

I need opinions regarding my band logo (that i've mentioned in another thread). I'm now making a poll about it.

Here's the picture

http://i31.tinypic.com/30ie4wj.jpg

 

[Sir Travis D]

Try making that whole outside of the speaker white outlined. It looks amazing though

 

[brian]

looks good, my only sudgestion is take the main heart and size it a but so it is more in the middle. looks a little odd being that close to the edge

 

[diduknowthat]

Thanks for the input guys. Here's rev. 2.

http://i25.tinypic.com/1zft08x.jpg

 

[Sir Travis D]

That looks sweet but this happened.

 

[4NGU$]

make the guitar neck smaller

and change the font for the band name

just my two cents

 

[Ramodkk]

That's very original man!

I have one suggestion and it is changing the placement of the name.
What about putting eart in small letter after the H and putting oston upside down to the left of the B

 

[Sir Travis D]

Yea, maybe you could make the guitar 5-10 percent smaller, and angle it so it fits on the card more.

 

[TFT]

If the guitar neck was scaled to fit on the card more then to balance it the speaker would have to be scaled down a little. I like the overlap part of it and it looks quite balanced.

Maybe a font change, dunno. It's very creative though, good job.

 

[diduknowthat]

That looks sweet but this happened.

Yup, I've noticed that and changed it, but was too lazy to upload another one .

make the guitar neck smaller

and change the font for the band name

just my two cents

Hm, I'll change that and repost it to see how it looks. I kinda like it being unproportionally big. Also, what font do you think will fit this better?

That's very original man!

I have one suggestion and it is changing the placement of the name.
What about putting eart in small letter after the H and putting oston upside down to the left of the B

I see what you mean, but looking at the picture, I have a feeling that it'll look a bit busy with names there. I'll try it in the next revision to how it looks like though.

If the guitar neck was scaled to fit on the card more then to balance it the speaker would have to be scaled down a little. I like the overlap part of it and it looks quite balanced.

Maybe a font change, dunno. It's very creative though, good job.

I kinda like the guitar neck hanging off the card.

 

[Sir Travis D]

I don't think you should put the "eart" or "oston" in either.

 

[voyagerfan99]

Add a drum and a stick.

 

[Ben]

It seems like the "Hearts of Boston" is completely out of place. A different font might suit it better too...

 

[diduknowthat]

I don't think you should put the "eart" or "oston" in either.

Yeah, I tried it and it doesn't look too hot.

Add a drum and a stick.

I was thinking of that, but it's kinda hard to make something out of a drum with only red, black and white.

My only suggestion right now is a different font.

It seems like many people want a new font. I'll look into that right away.


What font does everyone think I should use? I'm looking at Impact right now.

 

[Sir Travis D]

Use GTA3 font
download here -http://eknp.com/php/fd.php?f=gta3
looks like this

 

[Sir Travis D]

but you didn't fix that spot I told you about
and what about the gta3 font? please just show what it looks like!

 

[diduknowthat]

but you didn't fix that spot I told you about
and what about the gta3 font? please just show what it looks like!

Oops, I linked the wrong one. And I'll try that font too.

edit:

Rev 3
http://i26.tinypic.com/2v84r69.jpg

Red 3.1
gta 3 font
http://i26.tinypic.com/nyw9yg.jpg

 

[Sir Travis D]

gta3 font plzz

 

[Ben]

EDIT: added the hearts..vertical "B" now.

 

[diduknowthat]

Heres a simple version I just did, dunno if you would like it or not though...

Hmm, it looks good, but IMO it's just rock band ish. ya know, it just doesn't jump out at you a lot.